The Dolphins of
Altair
By Margaret St. Clair
p. 1967
p. 1967
I will admit that St. Clair’s The Dolphins of Altair is a fantasy novel I picked up mostly out of
novelty—the idea that super intelligent dolphins would join up with some
hippies and free themselves from the tyranny of humanity was just too good to
pass up. Just under 200 pages, the book was a quick read and, just like other
fantasy novels of the 1960s that I’ve encountered, far more of an interesting
case study than it was a layered, poignant, or well-written story. I am not
going to spoiler-tag this one, because honestly no person in their right mind
would seek out this book after reading this review.
Altair jumps right
into the action, joining together in the very first chapter the legendary intelligent
dolphins, or sea people as they call themselves, with a trio of humans who
happen upon their psychic call. It is narrated by Amtor, a dolphin who
considers himself a historian of his people. The humans are Madelaine, a young
woman who loses her memory when the dolphins call out to her and acts as their
primary vehicle for translation, Sven, a young man who hears the call
accidentally, and Dr. Lawrence, Madelaine’s psychologist, who follows the girl
out of curiosity when she goes to answer the call of the sea. He has the
hardest time fitting in to this covenant he wasn’t necessarily invited to join,
but he sticks around anyway to help the dolphins with their ultimate plan.
And what is that plan, you might ask? Well, it’s simple,
really. Phase One: the sea people must free all the dolphins from human-run
research labs; Phase Two: make sure humans never bother them again. No problem,
right? Should be a cinch.
For whatever reason, the dolphins decide this must be done immediately, and in lieu of peaceful
protests or sending in the animal rights activists or something else sane, if a
bit mundane, our righteous heroes decide to steal a device that causes an
earthquake—yes, an earthquake—to free all the sea people at once.
And they do just that.
But wait (!) there’s more! Despite numerous setbacks,
including being hunted by the irate government for their pretty severe crimes
against humanity (the details of which are glossed over) and betrayed by an
ally, the dolphins and their loyal humans go ahead with Phase Two, which
involves making another device called
the ahln, to plant in the sea that melts
the polar fucking ice caps. But only a little! At least, that’s the plan.
The brilliant logical reasoning behind this idea is that by melting the polar
ice caps gradually (just a smidge!), humanity will be too busy dealing with the
repercussions (a nice gloss-over of worldwide devastation and death by drowning)
to worry about the dolphins anymore.
And they do that,
too. Actually, they fuck it up like the indecisive morons they are and melt the
ice caps all at once, thus kickstarting an apocalypse, and they barely even feel
bad about it.
Here is my problem with this story: the trio’s plan isn’t
just extreme, it’s fucking overkill. Literally. I was ready to chalk all this
up to the inclinations of the author, Margaret St. Clair, who I assumed to be a
‘Save the whales!/Damn the man!’-style hippie of the highest order (I was
close; she is, however, an
established Wiccan). I figure, all right, this woman clearly loves dolphins, so
she wrote a love letter to them in the form of an anarchist what-if novel. This
would have been acceptable if her main character (and the one the dolphins
trusted and revered the most), Madelaine, had any sort of conviction
whatsoever, any sort of drive to make
things happen.
But she doesn’t. She just fucking sits there feeling bad for
everyone and hemming and hawing over making the tough decisions. After being passively
injured, she actually becomes less
active, instead laying about like the
damsel in distress she clearly is, until she’s needed to help the dolphins
contact their spiritual leader or whatever, using Udra, a process of meditation
which involves—you guessed it—more lying around.
For a lead heroine being written by a proud female author,
there is no excuse for the vacuous hole where Madelaine’s personality should
be. Though she is a 20-something woman,
the book only refers to her as a girl, subtly stripping her of maturity and
responsibility. Worse than that, she is actually stripped of every vestige of
her personality when she loses her memory and wanders off, and when she recalls
a bit of her former life, she doesn’t care. She is an instrument of the sea
people now, here to do their bidding because that’s the only important thing in
life. St. Clair makes it clear that “Madelaine” does not matter, insofar as
calling her by various other names interchangably—Sosa, Moonlight, Madelaine—what
does it matter?
And the dolphins are on the same field as the girl. They call
the humans and implore them to help initiate change, then decline taking violent
action, pretending like they love the humans they feel wiser and better than. Their
personalities are equally interchangeable and not one of them stands out from
the next. We are supposed to root for Madelaine and the sea people, I guess,
because the writing straight up tells
us we’re supposed to root for them, but when it comes to making the hard decisions—killing
millions of one race to save another—Madelaine and the dolphins alike seem
awfully comfortable from up on their high horses.
Sven is a bit more active but disappears for a majority of
the novel when he is abducted by the ‘government’ only to reappear in a weird subplot that bears no relevance to the rest of the story so I won’t
mention it here. It’s Dr. Lawrence who really makes all the tough decisions. He
argues that humans are brutal beings who kill each other so wantonly that they
deserve punishment, formulates the earthquake plan, then reneges and tattles to
the government, leading to Sven’s capture, Madelaine’s injury and the slaughter
of many dolphins. Inexplicably he comes back, begs for forgiveness, and helps
Madelaine build the ahln, which would kill even more people than the earthquake. Despite being directly contrary to
the prior fears that led to his betrayal, Dr. Lawrence again argues that humans
deserve to die and goes against Madelaine/Dolphin wishes by stealing the ahln
and setting it on full power, thus being the direct cause of the apocalypse.
Distraught, he throws himself off a bridge before he can see the repercussions
of his actions.
Conveniently, the sea people and the main couple take no
part in this action, so we aren’t burdened with having to wonder whether the
heroes did the right thing. The third man played the part of scapegoat and he
paid for it with his life. If he was wrong or right, it doesn’t matter.
Somehow, Madelaine still gets credit for saving the dolphins, which is total
bullshit. Dr. Lawrence was the one with the conviction needed to make shit
happen and he was vilified for it. I’d care about him more if he weren’t
such a woefully inconsistent character... but even that is something the author couldn’t commit to.
I don’t want to drag Margaret St. Clair through the mud
here. I’m sure she was a nice person and this book is hypothetical at best,
but I can’t help but feel cheated. This was a story with true moral dilemmas...
which the author made damn sure we wouldn’t have to feel too bad about. This mystical ocean tale just lacked serious depth.
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