Showing posts with label western. Show all posts
Showing posts with label western. Show all posts

Thursday, August 15, 2013

Take the Money and Run... But It's Not Going to Help

No Country for Old Men
by Cormac McCarthy
p. 2005





No Country for Old Men is my second foray into the work of Cormac McCarthy, the first being the apocalyptic father-son drama, The Road, a few years back. Compared to The Road, No Country for Old Men is like My Little Pony, but I do not say that to disparage the latter; it’s still a very serious and contemplative book in its own right, I only mention this to give some insight on my expectations of the book prior to reading it.


No Country for Old Men is what happens when an average joe stumbles upon an incomprehensible fortune and suddenly becomes the most wanted man in Texas. Llewelyn Moss knows he’s asking for trouble when he stumbles upon the aftermath of a deadly shootout between drug dealers on the Mexican border and a suitcase full of millions left unattended, but he decides to play his luck and take the money home, prompting a whole menagerie of people it’s best not to mess with to give chase. Hot on Moss’s trail are a tormented old sheriff, Ed Tom Bell, who only wants to see Moss home safe to his loyal young wife, Mexican cartel members, and two rival hitmen, mouthy former military man Carson Wells and laconic and exotic Anton Chigurh, who is probably meant to be mysterious and fearsome, but comes off more as an inhumanly evil caricature.


As in The Road, I have to commend McCarthy for his economy with words. He has a way of saying very much with very little and possesses a sort of southern sagacity that is very effective. The monologues given by various characters are chock full of quotables, though they are not very realistic depictions of dialogue.


Some times, though, I feel as though McCarthy is too judicious with his vocabulary, as he has chosen here to leave out all forms of punctuation distinguishing dialogue exchanges. Without quotation marks, it’s often hard to tell when someone stops talking and starts thinking, and in long exchanges between two characters, I sometimes had to go back a few paragraphs, to the last time an indicator was used, to remember who was saying what. This gets a bit tedious after awhile, and emphasizes the exact reason why we traditionally employ transitional phrases in writing.


My other, lesser issue with No Country for Old Men is that there doesn’t seem to be a point to it all. Lots of stuff happens off screen, so to speak—important stuff, and there are too many threads full of sparsely developed characters. The style in which it is written suggests that maybe all of these threads will converge at the climax and we’ll see what it all means... but they don’t. They never come together, the bad guy wins, the ‘good guy’ learns nothing he didn’t already know, and you get the feeling that everything that made these characters potentially intriguing happened long before we met them.


And maybe this is one of those stories where you’re not supposed to learn anything, where there’s not supposed to be a point, where life is random and unfair and doesn’t mean anything (now that I think about it, the Coen brothers were the perfect people to adapt this novel to film), but, well, those kinds of stories have always been hit or miss with me anyway.


I do recommend this book though, on the whole. It makes for an engaging leisurely summer read, which sounds contradictory, but is really just my way of saying you'll be on the edge of your seat while reading it, but when you are done, you'll put the book down and probably not think about it much after that. As I’d said before, even if there is nothing else to sort through, the dialogue is rich enough to keep you rooted to the page... even if half of that is spent just trying to figure out what is going on.

Saturday, October 27, 2012

The Poor Man's Magnificent Seven Heads Out West



The Outcasts Series
by Jason Elder

War Hatchet
Pistols and Powder
p. 2000
 

I decided to try my hand at a western series after finding a few of them on the discount rack of a used book booth at Gibraltar. After browsing for a minute or so I snagged the only two of what appeared to be a long running series, the Outcasts series, by Jason Elder, which is a damn fine western name if ever I heard one.

Upon further deliberation, I probably should have been a bit more scrutinizing.
What I thought were two random books in a lengthy series turned out to be books three and four... of a series that only lasted four books. I can’t find a whole lot of information about Jason Elder or the Outcasts series, so I have no idea why he quit after four books, but it probably wouldn’t be off base to assume there just wasn’t enough demand to continue.

I feel like Elder watched a lot of old westerns and movies to prep himself for writing this series, as it is chock full of cliches and offensive stereotypes. The plot is simple and easy to stretch out—you have a group of diverse characters thrown together by circumstances and they are traveling west in hopes of finding a better life in California. Here is a rundown of the Outcasts; we’ve got:


  • Freed ex-slave
  • Noble savage
  • Kentucky-fried southern gentleman
  • Disgraced ex-army man who can't quit thinking like a soldier and assumes unofficial leadership
  • Drunken Irishman who likes to blow things up
  • And... horny young idiot?

And those cliches are every bit as empty as you’d expect them to be. No one has a really dynamic personality and there isn’t enough time spent on any of them in the books I read, especially the so-called leader, who is a dud. After spending most of book 3 in a saloon, the horny young idiot gets particular focus in “Pistols and Powder,” but he’s like the poor man’s Joe Cartwright, without the sufficient wits, nobility or charm that character possessed.

Hilariously, Elder wrote several of his character’s dialects into the story. The ex-Confederate southern gentleman is full on Foghorn Leghorn, referring to himself with “Ah” instead of “I”, “Ah’ve instead of I’ve” and so forth. This dialogue quirk was distracting enough but it was nothing compared to the awful mess that was the freed slave’s dialogue. There was not a single line in which Elder hesitated to fuck up the black man’s speech, producing cringeworthy sentences like “Well, yo’ done found yoreself de right company... We am all orphans—in a manner of speaking.” I get the value of writing dialect, in theory, and I understand wanting to write ‘realistically’ but for fuck’s sake, these books were written in 2000.

In addition to this travesty of the written word, “War Hatchet” was the first book I read, and less than half of the book actually centered on the Outcasts, the rest being dedicated to an obnoxiously plucky orphaned boy and a trio of inept villains. Choosing to steer the focus away from your main characters in book 3 of a series was a mistake and possibly a damning one. “Pistols and Powder” brought the focus back to our main characters and offered a more balanced story, but it wasn’t enough.

The Outcasts series had the feel of an old-timey western television series, something that would have had a long run and better company back in the fifties and sixties, but seeing a series like this written near the end of the millennium seemed a bit outdated. Elder’s characters just aren’t interesting enough nor is his writing intriguing enough to snare readers so it’s not the least bit shocking that the series just ended without resolution. Did the Outcasts ever reach California? Did the southern gentleman open his own fried chicken restaurant chain? Did the drunken Irishman ever find a decent saloon? How many STDs did the young guy pick up along the way? Alas, these are questions which we shall never know the answers to.